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An admissions officer will read many application essays from candidates all over the world each day. How will you sell yourself? How will you make yourself an exceptional candidate?  Impressive and unforgettable essays will be the final stage for you to present yourself and stand out in the applicant pool. On this page we discuss:

Tips for writing successful application essays

Common mistakes when writing application essays.

Tips for Writing Application Essays

Tips for Writing College Application Essays includes advice on the following topics:

  • Choosing a topic

  • Answering question directly and clearly

  • Being personable

  • Being specific

  • Keeping a positive tone

  • Using humor only if it works

  • Using simple language

  • Using an active voice

  • Creating a strong opening

  • Being specific and focused

  • Explaining events appropriately

  • Making your essay the right length

  • Proofreading carefully

  • Getting extra help

  • Starting early

For more detailed information, please visit the members only page Tips for Writing College Application Essays.

 

 

Common Mistakes on College Application Essays

  • Choosing a wrong topic or subject: picking an easy essay that does not show who you are.

  • Overselling yourself.  Being confident is good.  Being too confident is bad.

  • Not researching the colleges before writing your essays.

  • Not being specific and personal.

  • Not answering the question directly.

  • A weak opening.

  • Writing over the word limit.

  • A negative tone: If the student writes an essay full of complaints, or sounds sarcastic, lazy, or spoiled, he or she might be rejected.

  • Lying.

  • Using large, pretentious words.

  • Making excuses for any blemishes on your record, such as missing an important volunteer activity or performing poorly without a legitimate reason.

  • Using a passive voice.

  • Twisting the sentence structure.

  • Overusing humor: A little well-placed humor is ok, but don't be a clown.

  • Relying on your computer’s spell checker.

  • Not proofreading enough.

  • Writing at the last minute and not spending enough time writing.

  • Asking an adult or professional to write the essay.
     

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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